Other than the good advice that’s already been given…

your homepage is very feature-driven.

Users don’t care about features, they care about benefits…

What’s in it for them?

How will it help them?

People don’t want a hammer, they want to hang a picture on the wall of their children.

Also, your video seems like an onboarding type of video. The user hasn’t signed up yet. They want to know how your site will help them, not how to use it yet.

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