Hey man well done on the site!
I am on iOS iphone 4s - unfortunately the home page does not take up the whole screen
The “list a parking space” page is better in terms of taking up more of the screen.
Also I was able to look at the “list a parking space” page once; I clicked a button, i think “more info,” on a parking space - the popup went beyond the perimeter of my browser screen, and was not fully visible.
I use 380 x 640 (mobile) pixels… seems to pull it off on most of the devices I have tried
Now:
Some observations (coming from an obsessive UI hound; so take with a grain of salt)
- I would consider allowing users more access to the site; I was prompted to sign up much too soon. I think if a user is able to browse the parking spots you have to offer/ plus your service; then and only then will they be incentived to actually sign up. Having to sign up first - and finding out what the app actually does second is generally pretty unappealing from a users perspective.
Also rather then saying:
“Rent a used space from a neighbour in your building or area. Alternatively, earn money renting yours out to a neighbour in your area!”
I would say:
"Rent a used space from a neighbor in your building or area, or earn money renting yours… etc etc
And the captions in “renting a space” are underlined while the caption in “listing a space” are not underlined (also one of the S’s is lower case…)
Under Book and Confirm - it says “…one of our team to collect…” – I think you should say “someone from the team” or “one of our team members”
Also looks like the How it works and Get started buttons are not actually necessary - if anything they are slightly confusing because if my page is already scrolled to the bottom and I click “Get Started” nothing happens… because i am already looking at the “Get Started” section…
OK. That’s my thoughts. Do not overthink or take anything personally. If there’s one thing I’m good at, its fussing about minuscule details (i do it with my own app too)
I think you will do very well. If there’s one thing those expats and sheikhs need, its a place to park their baby blue color Rolls Royce haha.
Good job on the site/concept!
PS: I just looked at your desktop version, it looks really good!!