Hey community, this is my first application ever built. can my community be the first testers and users
i don’t know if the idea behind this app be useful for some. i wanted to iterate on that idea so i built it. i would love to hear feedback from my community. on anything that you find.
This is the link: https://xt-27616.bubbleapps.io/
Hey @aneetkesi 
For me personally, there was way too much reading. I tried the ‘see how it works’ and I lost interest after a few clicks. 
thank you for the feedback @J805 . Appreciate your time. I am going to work on that.
Hello @aneetkesi, checked out your app — great concept!
A few things I noticed:
The email address input at the top doesn’t seem to be working.
Some forms and inputs aren’t very clear on what to enter — adding placeholder examples could help.
Might need padding and shadow adjustments to make the UI cleaner.
Overall, it looks good, just some bug fixes needed. Really promising work — hope this takes off!
Thank you man @georgekariuki49 for looking into it. good suggestions. i will be fixing them right now.
Hey @J805 @georgekariuki49, just fixed your recommendations. Again i appreciate your time. Working on on some @georgekariuki49 suggestions on design.
It needs work.
Not even sure what your headline means: Know yourself in days, or something like that… makes no sense.
You need to work on your copywriting.
A whole paragraph can fail, and yet a single sentence can drive results like crazy.
I’ve studied copywriting for years on the side and realize what an impact it has. It can take a nothing app and turn it into the world’s best.
Also, the responsiveness is not good.
Over 50% of people will be on mobile devices. Take some time to fix that.
Hi @aneetkesi
Ok i was about to ask the exact same thing for my app. So dont take this personally but just some quick observations…
Your landing doesn’t “hone into why” sure I want to be a better version, but after scrolling down I only got depressed on that I’m 66% through my life, and hadn’t even released ym first app on Bubble yet…
Take it or leave it but think the little things like this will turn a user away.
It really does seem interesting app, but still not sure how your app will give me a better version, at least a teaser.
I would work on your landing page, and since we can assume everybody wants to be a better version of themselves, maybe touch on either the how to get there, or the puppies, rainbows and sunshine that Ill get after using your app. But then I have the exact similar issues….especially on the landing page. (Think all that ‘Hook’ stuff in marketing, should touch on that a little above the fold so I would be inclined to scroll down.)
LMK, since I may be calling to do the same with my app, I am about to release my MVP and need to dot my Ts and cross my eyes.
James
Listen when I tell you this…
your app is a disaster and won’t work until you change some things like the copywriting.
I’ve worked with apps for 10 years.
You can disregard my suggestions and continue if you want… but, I’m telling you it won’t work
real suggestion @senecadatabase , appreciate it. It will open my mind if i get a example of what or how it should have been. Thank you for the suggestion.
Detailed suggestion @knockavideo . thank you for pointing “how your app will give me a better version” . Definitely i need to work on this. I am fix all your UI suggestion. Thank you again for pointing out things and giving your time. Thanks again
Yes, you are correct.
I was in a hurry yesterday and should have waited to comment until I had the time to give you better feedback.
I took a few minutes this morning to give you some quick suggestions…
Other than things like the header shows the content behind it before it disappears (the header background should be white like the page)… the biggest changes need to be in the wording and the flow.
Right now, the site feels hard to understand. That drives users away.
Users don’t stop by to solve the mystery of what your app does. They want to know immediately what it does and what they get out of it. There’s too much competition with other apps to expect them to search for answers.
You need to be brief and get the purpose of your app across immediately without trying to be cute or philosophical.
A big issue (for me at least) is the headline:
“Know yourself in your days”
It’s not clear what the app does. I had to stop and think about it, which is usually a sign that users might not “get it” in the first few seconds.
I think this could be improved a lot by making the action plus the outcome clearer.
On the flow side, I think the content is out of order.
Right now, it leads with more abstract/philosophical copy, and only later explains how the product actually works. You shouldn’t assume users have stopped by for a lesson in philosophy because usually, they’re just there to see what the heck the app does.
What do I do here?
What do I get out of it?
The “Start simple” section answers that, so I’d strongly consider moving that much higher, like right under the hero.
Clear headline (what it does plus benefit). Something like…
headline:
Track your days and see what actually makes them good
subhead:
Rate your day in seconds, add a quick note, and start seeing patterns in what makes your days good or bad.
Then a quick “how it works” (rate your day, add note, see patterns).
Show an example: A week of tracked days (green/yellow/red)
A note or two
A simple takeaway like “days with good sleep are consistently better”
That makes what the app does click without the user having to rack their brain to figure out what it does.
It just feels like the whole purpose of the app is hidden behind an attempt at cute wording and fancy UI.
If the first few seconds clearly show what the user does and what they get, I think this would be a lot better.
If you showed the hero section to someone for just a few seconds and then asked them what the app does, they should be able to tell you.
Good luck with your project
Thank you for pointing that out @senecadatabase . Thats right, i was being philosophical first and then talking about the use case. Am fixing that.
